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Tuesday, 22 September 2015

Summer's Narrative

The dark scary night                                                     
It was a dark scary night It was raining all night it was halling. There was a key on the ground so I picked it up. It had a money sien where you put the key in the door. The key was really rusty I was wondering  what would this key code open           


so  I looked everywhere to find it. I find this 1 door it would not open so I looked in the keyhole and it was blocked wïth mold so I sqeast and sqeast and the mold came out. then someone stole my key swept it  out of my hand so chase after him he gave it back i’m so happy. I put the key in the door suddenly the door opened I was so happy I went inside there

was so much money but there was mold on it oh no I would of been a milliner but no all of the money had mold on it!! I went in it even farther than before I went in farther there was so much spiters I got scared so I did not go in so I shut the the door is very broken.

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