This is my news report. It is about Rats rapidly rising. If rats lay eggs, then they don't stop laying eggs unless you clean out what they have done then they stop laying. I hope you enjoy my news report.
I like your topic on Rats and how you used good information like if rats lay eggs, then they don't stop laying eggs unless you clean out what they have done then they stop laying. Also next time speak louder.
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that was very awesome news report jasmine i learnt alot from it like LOTS!!!
ReplyDeleteI liked how much expression you used. I loved how you made the fake tv. Have you heard of the Black Plaque?
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DeleteI like your topic on Rats and how you used good information like if rats lay eggs, then they don't stop laying eggs unless you clean out what they have done then they stop laying. Also next time speak louder.
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DeleteI liked how you explained about if rats laid eggs. I especially liked how you said rats are rapidly rising. Speak louder next time.
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ReplyDeleteI loved your news report on rats. Work on looking up when you are reading from your page. Do you know Casey? Because she used to come to our school.
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Deletegood info next time go slow and clear
ReplyDeleteGood info Jas but be a bit louder but any way awesome
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