You have lots of good facts here Neika, It is important that we look after endangered animals. Unfortunately there a lot of greedy people around who only care about the financial benefits. Because you are reporting this out to people, I would suggest you start by introducing yourself e.g. Neika here, live with a Gilby news update, then finishing with something like- stay tuned for next times current event, Neika - Gilberthorpe news. Great to see you developing your knowledge and speaking skills! Keep it up :-)
Hi Neika, I really enjoyed watching your news report. You had a lot of factual information that helped me, the audience, understand why Crocs shouldn’t be killed. Why did you choose crocodiles to do your report on? Feel free to check out our class blog by clicking on my name.
Hi Neika. You used facts really well to explain how crocodiles are endangered. I think it’s important people understand how quickly animals can become extinct. Could you find a way to show some of your information visually next time?
I think Neika's news report was very informative. Next time I think that you could use more eye contact. How many Salt Water Crocodiles are there left now?
You have a great topic, I think that you should not kill crocodiles for their skin. Have you ever seen a crocodile? You should look up more information.
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You have lots of good facts here Neika, It is important that we look after endangered animals. Unfortunately there a lot of greedy people around who only care about the financial benefits. Because you are reporting this out to people, I would suggest you start by introducing yourself e.g. Neika here, live with a Gilby news update, then finishing with something like- stay tuned for next times current event, Neika - Gilberthorpe news. Great to see you developing your knowledge and speaking skills! Keep it up :-)
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ReplyDeleteHi Neika, I really enjoyed watching your news report. You had a lot of factual information that helped me, the audience, understand why Crocs shouldn’t be killed. Why did you choose crocodiles to do your report on? Feel free to check out our class blog by clicking on my name.
ReplyDeleteHi Neika. You used facts really well to explain how crocodiles are endangered. I think it’s important people understand how quickly animals can become extinct. Could you find a way to show some of your information visually next time?
ReplyDeleteI think Neika's news report was very informative. Next time I think that you could use more eye contact. How many Salt Water Crocodiles are there left now?
ReplyDeleteYou have a great topic, I think that you should not kill crocodiles for their skin. Have you ever seen a crocodile? You should look up more information.
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