In the weekend I went shopping with my mum and sister and my Dad drives and we got there and my dad stayed in the car we went shopping and my Mum went to an Indian shop and nearly there was a shop and it was called the warehouse stationery me and my sister went there and I thinking to get some stuff for school and it was a rubber sharpener and bendy ruler is from kookie that is that is the name of the shop and the colour is fantastic blue and blue is my favorite colour I really love the colour and it is so beautiful and lovely and pretty it is so
lovely.
That sounds like a great day. I like those bendy rulers too.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your weekend story because I found it really interesting and you used heaps of describing words. I enjoyed reading it but next time put some more information in like what other shops did you go to. What other shops did you go to?
ReplyDeleteI really liked your weekend story and how you explained lots and used describing words.
ReplyDeleteNext time don’t use the word lovely so much.
Did your mum and sister get anything?