During the Literacy block in Rimu and Rata Class, one of the tasks to complete is to create a news report from a current event. Check out Dylan's first news report.
What a great example of Learn Create Share! I really enjoyed your news report on drowning. Wow that is a lot of people drowning especially under 25 years old. How many people drown in New Zealand a year?
Kia ora Dylan. I really enjoyed your news report. This was a very interesting news report. I think next time you could try to look at the camera/iPad a little more so that you are not looking down at your notes. Maybe you could have your notes on an iPad next to the person who is recording you so that you are looking the same way.
Dylan's News Report was a great hook for me to read more. It was sad when you said that in Australia every hour people died. Why do people died every hour in Australia?
Dylan's News Report-Dylan your report was very interesting and had good facts .I think you could use more eye contact. where did you get that information from because it’s really interesting?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
What a great example of Learn Create Share! I really enjoyed your news report on drowning. Wow that is a lot of people drowning especially under 25 years old. How many people drown in New Zealand a year?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Dylan. I really enjoyed your news report. This was a very interesting news report. I think next time you could try to look at the camera/iPad a little more so that you are not looking down at your notes. Maybe you could have your notes on an iPad next to the person who is recording you so that you are looking the same way.
ReplyDeleteDylan's News Report was a great hook for me to read more. It was sad when you said that in Australia every hour people died. Why do people died every hour in Australia?
ReplyDeleteDylan's News Report-Dylan your report was very interesting and had good facts .I think you could use more eye contact. where did you get that information from because it’s really interesting?
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