I loved how you used a really loud voice it was very clear. It was excellent how your topic was the birthday song because it is very different from others. Why do you think they made such a deal about it?
Great effort Aryan, very entertaining! I like how you signed in and signed off- Literacy news is a cool name as well. I could tell you were trying to look at the camera too, keep working on that. Well done!
Nice reporting Aryan, you are very expressive and you are a capable reporter. Reading the news could be your job of the future! Is your news about the traditional Birthday Song? I am amazed that they are allowed to own it. Great reporting.
Good stuff Aryan! I thought you spoke really well. Maybe next time, the camera could go on a tripod, or get the camera person to hold it still. I also thought your body language, particularly your hand movements, were very good. Tino pai!
Good stuff Aryan! I thought you spoke really well. Maybe next time, the camera could go on a tripod, or get the camera person to hold it still. I also thought your body language, particularly your hand movements, were very good. Tino pai!
Hi Aryan, you spoke very confidently. I found your news article very engaging. Would having a tripod to steady the camera be helpful? Thanks for sharing this.
Brilliant work Aryan you had good information and cool facts.But maybe next time you could add a bit more information on your facts.By the way where did you get your information from?
Great job Aryan you used a good voice and easily hooked me into your video. You had great facts and next time use better eye contact. Where did you get those facts from?
The video was great. The timing was excellent and the information, is recent and great. Where did you get your info from? Eye contact is limited, but you did look up.
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Awesome news report aryan
ReplyDeleteI loved how you used a really loud voice it was very clear.
DeleteIt was excellent how your topic was the birthday song because it is very different from others.
Why do you think they made such a deal about it?
Thanks ems
DeleteGreat effort Aryan, very entertaining! I like how you signed in and signed off- Literacy news is a cool name as well. I could tell you were trying to look at the camera too, keep working on that. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks mr.w!!!
DeleteNice reporting Aryan, you are very expressive and you are a capable reporter. Reading the news could be your job of the future! Is your news about the traditional Birthday Song? I am amazed that they are allowed to own it. Great reporting.
ReplyDeleteGood stuff Aryan! I thought you spoke really well. Maybe next time, the camera could go on a tripod, or get the camera person to hold it still. I also thought your body language, particularly your hand movements, were very good. Tino pai!
ReplyDeleteThanks scott!
DeleteGood stuff Aryan! I thought you spoke really well. Maybe next time, the camera could go on a tripod, or get the camera person to hold it still. I also thought your body language, particularly your hand movements, were very good. Tino pai!
ReplyDeleteThanks scott
DeleteHi Aryan, you spoke very confidently. I found your news article very engaging. Would having a tripod to steady the camera be helpful? Thanks for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteOk and thanks
DeleteI've dug out a tripod so we can have some steady camera work going. I love your expression in this news report Aryan.
ReplyDeleteOkay thanks
DeleteBrilliant work Aryan you had good information and cool facts.But maybe next time you could add a bit more information on your facts.By the way where did you get your information from?
ReplyDeleteOkay and I got these facts from behind the news :)
DeleteGreat job Aryan you used a good voice and easily hooked me into your video. You had great facts and next time use better eye contact. Where did you get those facts from?
ReplyDeleteOkay and I got these facts from behind the news :)
DeleteAryan, great report I liked the fact of the day.You could use a bit more eye contact.How can you find out if you have to pay for the song or not?
ReplyDeletethanks i don't know how but still thanks!!
DeleteThe video was great. The timing was excellent and the information, is recent and great. Where did you get your info from? Eye contact is limited, but you did look up.
ReplyDeleteThe inormation is from behinde the news
DeleteIt is a very good story Aryan maybe speak louder but good work.
ReplyDeleteOkay I will work on it :)
Deletei like your news report ARYAN
ReplyDeleteThanks jake!!
Deletei like your news report ARYAN YOU COULD USE SOME EYE CONTACT
ReplyDeleteOkay and thanks :)
DeleteGreat story next time put more info
ReplyDeleteOkay thanks Tobey rocks
DeleteOkay thanks Tobey rocks
DeleteAryan this is awesome. Good job Awan
ReplyDeleteThanks claudia! :)
Deleteno problem
Deletearyan that great how you used a loud voice
ReplyDeleteGood education on your news report aryan Awesome.
ReplyDeletegood imfo aryan and your story was great i would like to see more
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