One direction are splitting up???!!! Oh no, what will I listen to? :-) A great topic to choose Jasmine, I am sure many others around the globe will be concerned about this news, good to hear they are taking a break though, it must be tough travelling and performing all the time.
Jasmine’s News report - Jasmine, you had really good information that was current. Your eye contact could be stronger. Do you like One Direction’s music?
Aryan I liked your news report about one direction and I liked how to didn't fidget with your hands when you spoke .Next time you could speak more louder and clearly. Do you like one direction?
I like how you had a big board around you and act like it was a real tv program. next time you could talk louder because i could not her you through the computer. why did you choose one direction?
8 aaliyah! I really enjoyed your news report Jasmine on one direction because you had good points.It was a gret topic and I could hear you very clearly.I liked the bit where you said how long they were splitting for (1 year ).next time : maybe you could say who it was that was leaving the group and why andf more info about them.how did you make those fake television? that was a very creative idea.
I liked how you looked at the camera all the time when you when recording.Next time you could put a little more information about One direction.Jasmine are you a One direction fan?
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I love your news report jasmine
ReplyDeleteOne direction are splitting up???!!! Oh no, what will I listen to? :-) A great topic to choose Jasmine, I am sure many others around the globe will be concerned about this news, good to hear they are taking a break though, it must be tough travelling and performing all the time.
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ReplyDeleteHi Jasmine, this was a very interesting news report. I did not know that One Direction had split up. How do you think their solo careers will go?
ReplyDeleteJasmine’s News report - Jasmine, you had really good information that was current. Your eye contact could be stronger. Do you like One Direction’s music?
ReplyDeleteI liked how you did it on One Direction next time talk louder.Who is your favourite member in One Direction?
ReplyDeleteI liked how you talked clear and how it was about One Direction and next time you could make it louder. Are you a fan of One Direction?
ReplyDeleteAryan I liked your news report about one direction and I liked how to didn't fidget with your hands when you spoke .Next time you could speak more louder and clearly. Do you like one direction?
ReplyDeleteI like how you had a big board around you and act like it was a real tv program.
ReplyDeletenext time you could talk louder because i could not her you through the computer.
why did you choose one direction?
I really enjoyed it and I liked how you used a fake TV and your describing words .
ReplyDeleteI like Jasmine on one direction 1D
8 aaliyah!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your news report Jasmine on one direction because you had good points.It was a gret topic and I could hear you very clearly.I liked the bit where you said how long they were splitting for (1 year ).next time : maybe you could say who it was that was leaving the group and why andf more info about them.how did you make those fake television? that was a very creative idea.
I liked how you looked at the camera all the time when you when recording.Next time you could put a little more information about One direction.Jasmine are you a One direction fan?
ReplyDeleteNice news report Jasmine.
ReplyDeleteWow I liked how you looked at the camra and speak clearly
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