Rata Class: September 2015

Friday 25 September 2015

Thursday 24 September 2015

Tuesday 22 September 2015

It was a dark scary night It was raining all night it was halling. There was a key on the ground so I picked it up. It had a money sien where you put the key in the door. The key was really rusty I was wondering what would this key code open

so I looked everywhere to find it. I find this 1 door it would not open so I looked in the keyhole and it was blocked wïth mold so I sqeast and sqeast and the mold came out. then someone stole my key swept it out of my hand so chase after him he gave it back i’m so happy. I put the key in the door suddenly the door opened I was so happy I went inside there

was so much money but there was mold on it oh no I would of been a milliner but no all of the money had mold on it!! I went in it even farther than before I went in farther there was so much spiters I got scared so I did not go in so I shut the the door is very broken.

Nathan's Narrative

Nathan’s journey and the shine gold key

chapter one

One day I was drinking some juice so I could beat the heat while the sun was shining in the sky while I was walking something was shining in my eyes all I know is how it is shining.

so I got to it. I got closer and closer and closer until I Guest❗ it’s a KEY❗ I was shocked but when I tried it on a lock and the key broke into two pieces but the way to the key shop was off but I dowe know way.

Claudia's Narrative

I was walking down the slippery wet street. There were massive puddles of water everywhere. The puddles were so big and watery that the water went in my shoes. The water filled up all the gutters in the street. There were heaps of ice on the concrete floating in the massive puddles of water. Suddenly I walked over something hard in the massive puddles of water. I couldn’t really see what it was because the water wasn’t that clear so I put my hand down in the water and I reached down pulled my hand back up and I found a key.

The key was shiny gold with a rocky side. It also had two circles at the top of the key. The key was small and is curved around the outside of the key. It looked like it opened something really magical. I found a door as I was walking down the street. The door looked very magical. The door was white with bright green bushes around the outside. I walked over to the door and I put my key in the door. Suddenly the key wouldn’t go in. Two doors shut behind me. I was stuck outside in the rain. I started crying because I thought I was never going to get out.

As I was crying I saw something pink and fluffy flying towards me. I tried to get a better look at what was coming towards me then I saw that it was a pink fluffy unicorn that had a unicorn key so I can finally open the door and have a look what’s inside. I had no idea what was inside. So I opened the door and Then I saw beautiful rows of pink and purple daisy’s that were fully grown and the beautiful flowers looked they had been watered every day and had plenty of sunshine.After I saw the flowers I walked along the rocky path and saw pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows.The unicorns were sliding on and off the rainbows. The pink unicorns were so pink and fluffy that they felt like soft fluffy clouds. There was three unicorns. One was called Marley the second one was called Moomoo and the last one was called Coco. They were all very nice but Marley wasn’t as good as Moomoo and Coco. Moomoo said I could stay for a bit so I did.We played on the rainbows and the unicorns showed me their rooms. Then I needed to go home after because if I didn’t my mum would be freaking out about me. When I went outside the weather was more sunny and there was also a rainbow in the sky. I couldn’t wait to see the unicorn friends again.