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Tuesday 22 September 2015

Nathan's Narrative

  Nathan’s journey and the shine gold key
                       chapter one
One day I was drinking some juice so I could beat the heat while the sun was shining in the sky while I was walking something was shining in my eyes all I know is how it is shining.
so I got  to it. I got closer and closer and closer until I Guest❗ it’s a KEY❗ I was shocked but when I tried it on a lock and the key broke into two pieces but  the  way to the key shop was  off but I dowe know way.
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  1. Anonymous24 September 2015 at 13:19

    well done nathen is awesome

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  2. alyscia.k24 September 2015 at 13:19

    great work nathan i like your writing

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    1. Anonymous14 October 2015 at 13:40

      put a capital I in your comment.

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  3. Anonymous24 September 2015 at 13:23

    Good work Nathan but next time make it a bit lonnger

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  4. Anonymous12 October 2015 at 13:30

    Nathan what happens next?

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  5. Anonymous12 October 2015 at 13:30

    Nathan what happens next?

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  6. summer.b14 October 2015 at 13:42

    awesome words nathen

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  7. Anonymous14 October 2015 at 13:42

    Nathan a story has more the one chapter but good work.

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